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Monday, October 1, 2012

Soulless: Prologue Version One



Fairy tales of cheerful things never caught my attention but when faced with a tragic end I all but squealed to listen. Now hear me well and pay close mind to the story I have to tell because you never know when a fairy tale might be real.

Once upon a time there grew a flower of unimaginable beauty. Its petals were of the softest feel and its scent held creatures captive. Who so ever looked at this tall but fragile looking creation of God was said to be granted eternal life for it was said this was a plant survived from the Garden of Eden itself but was moved and hidden by the Angels. Searching high and low to no end, Men looked for this flower of youth but all that set to find it vanished, nothing was ever found. Truth was this hypnotic plant sent people to eternal life through death, a death so terrible it burned the skin off your body. This little tulip watched as creatures rapidly learned of its’ terrible gift and it became lonely. The soil where it thrived was deadly to any other vegetation and so it stayed in the shadows with only a slight glimmer hitting its leaves. “Who could love poison?” The poor plant cried, its tears reaching past the barrier that held it captive. That was when the man came, a man that aged by the agony of lose and hatred of human kind. He, being a man of science not religion, looked for this plant to have it take his last breath. It gazed at the man with wonder as he bowed. “Dear plant of Eden, or so it is told, I am here to ask for a demise well deserving of a man with nothing to live for,” peering up he gazed at the white petals with a beautiful red color sprouting like fire from the middle of its one medium bloom. Something unexpected happen making the man jump out of shock but only in amazement. “Man, Gods greatest creation that searches for me to pro long their meeting with the heavens, you do not wish for what others have wished for? Why only death you long me to fill you with?” Clearing his throat, he approached the sweet, curious plant. “Creation, created to purge men of their unholiness, I wish for death for I do not desire life without someone I love and all I love has been taken,” Coming ever so close, he touched lightly the stem of the beautiful flower and continued. “I much rather hold something as stunning as you to love one more time, rather than live forever never knowing the sweet voice of a caring heart.” The poison flower’s silky voice wept for the lonely man. “I do not wish you to die with such regret in your heart, instead stay by my side as my lover so you can die with happiness,” Brown eyes grew large as he smiled softly. “Then, my poison beauty, I shall call you dream, my love.” The man kissed a leaf upon the plant and did not die. Because the flower loved him, it gave him immunity but that also would cause it to wilt ever so slowly and painfully. What it had given him was its ability to regenerate when the poison did but now she wasn’t able to keep up. Years went by and the man noticed his lover’s sickness. “My Dear Dream why do you look so sick? Have I caused you misery beyond your power?” The flower gave a gloomy sigh as it tried to reach up towards him but it was too weak. In a raspy voice still lined with a silky under tone, it told him the truth. “My loving Darling, I dare say I am dying for I gave you the essence of what keeps me alive so I may not be lonely any longer,” Frantic, he ran back to his lab he had built near his precious treasure. Night after night he worked, trying to find a way to keep her alive. It was of no avail but there was something he could do. Walking depressed towards his love, he told it the sad news. “I do not wish to live forever without anyone,” He sobbed. The Striking Poison Flower seemed to smile in its words. “Take it,” He gazed up from his watered eyes. “Take my only bloom, the center piece of my heart, and in turn sacrifice your blood. You cannot save me but you can always have me,” With a heavy broken heart he took her petal and placed it in a jar to preserve it. Searching the world, the man looked for the perfect vessel for his creation. A human child, a baby just born that could grow with the poison. Finally after three years of searching, a baby was born, dead, and unmoving. The man stole the baby away as the grieving family came after him in anger, but he was prepared. The lab was already set as he lay its’ still warm body in the box and hooked it up. In seconds it worked. He watched as the baby girls color came back and a full head of vibrant scarlet hair grew out of her head. Her veins pulse green and then vanished under her skin. Perfection! It had worked and the baby now cried. She no longer held the soul of that family’s child but the spirit of the venomous flower. “My Dear Dream, This is our baby, Ashlyn,” He kissed the child but than his moment was cut short by the screams of the women he had stolen the vessel from. Fearful, He ran towards the nearest town where a Queen resided as ruler. Crestfallen, He laid the child at the door step, her red brown eyes looking up at him with longing. She was quiet, peaceful and beyond her years. “I will return to you sweet Ashlyn,” He covered her in an odd substance and vanished. The door opened and it all started the tale of a poison princess.

8 comments:

Anonymous said...

Meh, this one was empty. Not a bad beginning by the way. Well damn. I somehow missed the fact that you knew it was me. By like a month or two. And to be rather frank, whether or not I feel hurt or not is beside the point. I have always felt hurt and sad. And tired. And disappointed. And just plain fuckin miserable. And yet I still managed to laugh. Hahaha!!! I do what I will. What happens to me is a consequence of my own actions. Regardless of how much I regret it afterwards. Sigh.....as to why I hold on? Hmmm....if I had to take a guess, I'd say it was due to the fact that you were my best friend for three long years. And let's face it, three years is a long ass time considering that is a pretty friggin huge chunk of my remembered life. Yeah, I was pissed. Yeah, I said things that made you go away. And yes, for the longest while I knew that as hard as I could try, I only had a seven percent chance of making you miserable. This due to the rather grand lesson you taught me my sophmore year, your freshman, "It's better to look happy than to look miserable." Or something along those lines. Heh heh. And no one said you had to please everyone. Just to please them. Course looking back I was one hell of a selfish bastard of good for nothing lazy procrastinator. Still am too. I think? Now as to whether or not I wanted to get rid of my sadness and frustration (you apparently) what I wanted was for you to say something back. Namely, actually I can't even write this out without every other word being one of the main cuss words. I literally erased it like 3 times before I said screw it. Damn. Oh and issue for me, well yeah. You are an issue because you pretty much shaped me into the complete jackass I am now. I can't lie (in fact I tell you damn well what I think about you without giving a damn care how I sound). I can't hate very well(although I must admit, I feel very bitter). I can't feel misery (damn happiness or not caringness keeps kicking in). Frustration, yeah. That's normal. And forced. Yeah I forced your hand as a gamble, which I sorely fuckin lost miserably to high hell and back again. And I never abandoned you. I would've kept pestering you had you not blocked me. Wait a minute...I still am. So yeah....really bleeding hard to call this abandonment Ashley. By the way, I keep mispelling your name as Ashly. Or is that the right way? Also as to why I make all of these anonymous is due to the fact that it's so much freaking easier to leave a commment that way. My god. It's ridiculous. Any other option involves so much more work!!! Yeah, I'm still lazy. Oh and I wanted to make you think that people actually come here on a regular basis. Failed apparently. Also happy birthday. Although by the time you read this it will be most likely long past. Insert maniacal evil laughter here. Also if you feel like it you can most likely delete this comment. Don't know why you didn't for the other ones. Although, I never meant any harm in any of them I think? Wierd.....oh well. Fun time over I guess. I'll still keep checking in every so often for entertainment I suppose. Manga and anime get boring after a while. Yep, I hate myself. And yes, I feel sorry. Not that that means a damn thing to you. Meh. For another time I guess.


P.S. A good bit that this is about is from the comment you had left beneath the two scientist me's for Never beg for mercy. I remember your memory sucks. That's why I left this bit here.

Demonkitten said...

I wrote this in a child's fairy tale form, so it isn't meant to be complex. What you do not like the idea of scientific experimentation turning a child into a poison plant? Btw, this story shows what people believe if me. Like everyone says, I'm a soul sucking temptress with no heart. This whole book is based on that part of me

Demonkitten said...

Also I have other people read this and I'm too lazy to delete your comments. I just tell them to ignore them and your just an ass.

Anonymous said...

I won't argue that your a soul sucking temptress. Never mind, I love to argue. To be more precise, the flower in the story killed people. You transform people. Jeff into an idiot parent who for a short time searched out for women and was strangely successful. Me (codenamed Joe Monstahunta) into a complete ass (which hilariously enough, was due to my love for you [being completely serious here too] [actually love may be the wrong word]). Myself (codenamed Bob) into a person who doesn't really care about anything. And I(codenamed God Emperor John Williamson) into a stubborn lovestruck fool who desperatly wants to be close to you. I really don't like him. And I don't care for a lot of things since it takes care of hatred rather nicely too. Although I will admit, in order to replace you in the whole continuam of the imaginary we had to replace you with 14 different women. Well, one was already there, but we ended up further creating her personality and created 13 other women. And you turned Cameron into a person whose soul desire is to go places that cost money or was that my fault. Eh, I'll just blame it on the both of us. And Timmy boy? You know, thinking about it, I don't know anything about him. Like really? Wierd...really wierd...point is rather that a soul sucking temptress, you more along the lines of a soul terraformer. Or corruptor. Your pick. And actually I don't think anyone calls you a soul sucking temptress at all except for yourself and maybe Tim. Most people thought you were either very beautiful or a slut (term here means woman that uses her charm (charm meaning body (body not meaning sex(could be totally wrong))) to convince men to do her bidding). And also fairy tales are usually drawn out for some odd reason in the sense that people love to analyse the crap out of them. Learned that in English 202. Absolutely dreadful stuff. And I never said your story was terrible. Hell I didn't say anything bad about it. I'm actually kind of intriged as to how it goes. Also all of the comments I posted had nothing assholish about them except for two of them. However, I am kind of disappointed that my entertaining game is over. I was doing my damndest to avoid suspicion of my existance. Sigh. Damn my vocabulary. But I digress. I want to punch myself in the face and throw myself out a window. So I'll bother you some more later. And besides, no matter how low I get, I can't really get lower than you. I tried though. I really did. Still failed though. Wow, we all voiced opinions in here. Absofreakinglutely astounding.

Demonkitten said...

Do you honestly want me to be friends with you again? because you sure as hell are doing a poor job!

Anonymous said...

How to answer that? Really how the bleeding hell am I to answer that? Like I said I suppose, one third of me wants to be friends with you, another third makes the body entire feel ill and bitter just seeing your picture (no really, I haven't the slightest clue why but just seeing your picture makes me feel horrible!!!), and the last third is pondering the situation at hand. Way I see it, on one hand yeah. And the other hand no. I don't know. No real way to really force my hand in this either or I would've done it by now. Must say though, that is a really bleeding fine question. Still... I. Simply. Don't. Know. Pros of being friends with you:................................................................................................................................................................................................................the shit? I can't think of one. Normally I'm good at thinking of pros, but hell I doubt you could come up with any yourself. You know but in reverse. I doubt you could up with any pros with being friends with me again. But DAMN THIS IS PISSING ME OFF!!!! What are the bleeding pros?!!!! Oh dear lord...this would be the third time I've wanted to punch myself in the face today. Let's see Cons?: you'll hold this incident over my head till the day I die. Not to mention, something like this will happen again eventually. It's kind of an annual event if you really think about it. Damn, it really is an annual event. First was mardi gras. Then it was me deciding to not talk to you that one time and you deciding to go into hate mode on my ass. Then this year would be the current event. Yep. Also,there is a picture of a currently unnamed anime chick with little demon snowman earing and bat wings, and bat ear things that go on top of the head, wait way off topic here. But eh, what do you think about it?

Anonymous said...

Cameron said something to me. He said you think that I think lowly of you. Ashley, it's not you that I think lowly of, it's me. I've never thought lowly of you. I was too ashamed to admit this to you at the time, or rather I did admit it, after you blocked me. For the longest time, I questioned why the hell was I ever your friend? I'm a person whose only god given talent is making a situation vastly worse than it was to begin with. I'm selfish, arrogant, cowardly, lazy, master of procrastination, an asshole, a person that would insult losers if I called myself one, a fool, a miserable wretched scum of an idiot that deserves no happiness whatsoever. I can't think of a good reason to be your friend simply because I have no right to be your friend. I made you sad out of desperation for your approval. And I committed a sin that you could never truly forgive me for. Nor could I forgive myself even if it was an act committed out of ignorance. That's why I forced you to quit being my friend. Because I fully one hundred percent believe that I has absolutely zero right to continue to be your friend and I still don't. I lost it entirely. The only thing I can pride myself on is not being a liar, and honestly, I doubt that is all that true. I lie by omission. I don't say what I feel. Or rather I do, but with a grin. I lie all the time. And if I were honest to myself, the reason why I feel ill looking at you is because of how guilt ridden I am. I can't even cry, because I don't believe I have any right to. You know what, just ignore this. It's just the ramblings a person whose existance was meant to be thrown away.

Anonymous said...

I'm actually going to comment on what you posted Ashley, whether you feel it's a reflection of you, or this guy wants to harass you over it and critique it, i think it's great. Absolutely GREAT. Tried watching a movie in-between reading it and. . i had to pause the movie so i could finish reading. Even if this is supposed to represent some aspect of your personality, Fiction is nothing but Fiction. basing it on something real only makes the fiction more REAL, and harder to put down. i loved the story. and i loved the continuation that you posted later on. Keep up the amazing work!